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Re: Smile
Hello! First off, WOW! I had never thought of a smile like the way you're describing it. I liked how you captured all of the different emotions you can feel ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: Memories of the Heart
Overall I thought it was a well put together poem. You gave a great message through this poem, and I like how you put "Choose carefully your memories" at the ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Opening Paragraph to My Novel
First and foremost, I want to read more now. you hooked me, and I wonder what your approach will be when writing this story. One thought I had was to ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Blood Thistle Trilogy Book 1 Prologue
This is my first review I've written on this site, so bear with me. Your story reminded me of previous European based historical fiction novels, which I enjoyed. I wasn't ...
Oct 9, 2014
