SuperGamer991

Thnx for that I will make sure to take your suggestions to work in chapter 2. And I like that you noticed that the protagonist isn't the normal cookie cutter ...

Thnx man. I know the sentence fluency could be better and grammar suckes but I will get better at it as I continue. I did want people to ask themselves ...

Wow man that was a really good peace of work. It sheds light on the problem of the younger generation/my generation using words in wrong ways. If you did not ...