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SunshineandCarnage

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    Thanks for this. This is my opinion as well.

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Isis- The Egyptian Goddess- A one page paper

    Hey, Sunny here with your review. It's very nice. Isis is one of my favorite mythological figures, next to mighty Aphrodite of course.

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Son is Gay

    Despite lack of details, this piece is extremely raw and relatable. Many kids go through this every day and there is a growing number of gay teens in the world. ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Vimini

    Leaves very much to the imagination, whihc isn't necessarily a good thing. It could have used detail. This I say with respect

    Nov 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: NaNoWriMo

    Very lovely story, Wolfie

    Nov 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Ugly Girl

    Certainly interesting and for many, relatable. Very cold quality. Could be improved but yes, it's good. Wonderful job

    Nov 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Home Sweet Home

    What a lovely story. I love a good scare. I like how you left the ending to the reader's imagination. Well done, my friend.

    Nov 17, 2011


Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore