Suketsune

I really like the potential behind this prologue and can't way for more. All the major things that I was going to go over have been mentioned time and time ...

I liked it's length. While yes it was short, making it much longer could have detracted from the true essence of the story. I spotted a few typos, but those ...

It was wonderful. The description and detail was superb. I could picture the whole thing without trying. The ending, while killing the suspense, brought a smile to my face on ...

Your way with the words is great. Very good imagery. Although, I prefer staying away from Adverbs as much as possible. Omit where necessary thing, ya know? There are no ...