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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: No Man's God

    Why? Just why? You'll feel hot and dying. This kind of ponder displays the mental instability of the person talking. im offended this is what i think 24/7 block /sarcasm ...

    Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:52 am
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    i prefer my glorified sex jokes with a punch of misery also i asked this once and i'll ask it again why the crepe of all things what next the ...

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 4:20 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    look son i know you as the guy who once rewrote the jupiter story into a glorious analogy about classism in your home country i do not like underestimating you

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:26 pm
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    im not sure if this was personal or a joke or both but either way this was genuinely amazing 10/10 would read again will review soon gotta take a moment ...

    Fri Mar 17, 2017 12:43 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.1 - Red Gas

    OH MY GOD I JUST REALIZED I'VE BEEN REVIEWING PARTS KILL ME IM SORRY

    Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:40 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Nine

    Are some Mediators known to God/angels but concealed from the rest of the world? The Psychiatrist is talking about non-Christian mediators (of which he's included--before this whole Mediator business,

    Mon Mar 13, 2017 4:46 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Nine

    I mean, for being a psychiatrist - who is presumably supposed to help Camiel with his anger issues - he's awfully antagonistic. Does he have a purpose in goading Camiel ...

    Mon Mar 13, 2017 4:28 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Eight

    Are Zachary and Gordon in love? Have they had a relationship in the past, or is this the beginning of something? Has Gordon been pining for Zachary or vice versa? ...

    Mon Mar 13, 2017 3:39 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Eight

    woah this is really detailed and great thank you

    Mon Mar 13, 2017 2:56 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Ten

    I mean, she could get away with some of that, I'm sure, but this is the first time her son's set foot outside in eight years? i remember writing this ...

    Mon Mar 13, 2017 2:50 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One

    Thanks for the grammar check, didn't realize there was still a lot to squash out. And you were probably brought in by my spamming the green room, so sorry about ...

    Sat Mar 11, 2017 4:10 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Joyful

    Ah yeah, I figured. Don't take what I said to heart, then, it's fine. Still, I do think flash fiction can be very powerful given the right push, and a ...

    Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:43 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Seven

    perfect

    Mon Mar 06, 2017 4:06 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Seven

    yes i killed the father whats your new acronym

    Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:34 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Seven

    i did not make any of this clear next time i'll just spell it out why am i so obtuse

    Mon Mar 06, 2017 3:13 pm


A big mountain of sugar is too much for one man. I can see now why God portions it out in those little packets.
— Homer Simpson