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Re: Hidden Entity - 2.1 - Red Gas
Ha. This was pretty good. I had picked up a bit on the relationship in the beginning, but I think it's only now that it's become something significant and, more ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 1.3 - Argument
Oo-kay. Now I see where the 'wisdom' part we talked about in the last review came from. With that said, I retain the fact that the first chapter's wording of ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 1.1 - Argument
Hey there Light. I promised you I'd review some chapters of these eventually, so here I am, no matter how late. (Keeping promises isn't my forte, really, but I'm slowly ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: Welcome Home
WARNING FOR ANY WANDERING REVIEWERS: first off, if you need a warning, you really shouldn't be here. second off, if you're still here, im going to mention some sexual acts, ...
Mar 11, 2017 -
Re: Detours
You have a good sense of description, let's get that out of the way first. Though I have my gripes with the work, I feel like it's strongpoint lies clearly ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Joyful
"Can murder be a happy thing?" am i the only one who thought 'as long as im holding the gun'. No, but really, I think it's a good question but ...
Mar 6, 2017 -
Re: Not Bothering to Zip up My Jacket
How very scenic. I'm not exactly a structuralist, so I don't demand that all my stories have a deeper meaning to them, but I did find this text somewhat futile. ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Walt's Receipt
A strange concept, one with plenty of potential, certainly. I have a feeling this might be continued, but despite knowing that, I felt strangely unsatisfied through the whole run. There ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: 2 am
As per request, I've come to see what I could do here, which I have said in the past isn't much considering all the reviews you've already gotten. Understand, it's ...
Jan 20, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 1.2 - Argument
Mea took a dip into this, but I'd like to take a bit of a dive, since (like usual) cosmological arguments are right up my alley. So since she left ...
Jan 14, 2017 -
Re: Odyssey of Strife: Ch 1, Heroic Squealing
Welp, that's enough dilly-dallying for today. Time to get into the review. I'm not going into too much detail (I say this now but I guarantee you my past self ...
Dec 25, 2016 -
Re: Pisces 1.1
Alright, so you reviewed Psalms (as you promised you would) and Kolfer (which you sort of delivered) so I may as well give you a review, too, except this time ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: 暗殺者
Paragraph breaks, fellow human. Have you ever heard of it? There is an amazing amount of things that are wrong with this work. There are also an amazing amount of ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Our Greatest Weakness is Our Only Strength
I'm always wary of reviewing things from a different medium than I'm used to, in this case, play scripts. That's because not everything from prosaic fiction transfers well into other ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: A Holiday for Detective Martha Rogers
The most common problem a story might have is a clash or complete lack of tone. It occurs in almost all genres, and is often more difficult to solve than ...
Dec 2, 2016
