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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Gems of Genocide (Re-Written)

    Alright, so I'm going to have to pull out my old trusty in-depth criticism list, so give me a moment while I endlessly blather my way through this review. Opening ...

    Apr 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Life is Strange Chapter 1

    Similarly to the rest of the reviewers, I too am amused that everybody is just cool with alien abductions and faeries and all that jazz. I'm not going to go ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Life is Strange Prologue

    Hullo there. Just dropping by for a quick review, so without further ado, let's begin. I'll talk about the content later on in brief (there's not enough for me to ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hidden Entity - 3.1 - The Crater

    Alright, so sorry if this'll be a short review (I'm really sorry that most of these are short reviews) but since I have to do homework and it's getting worryingly ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.4 - Red Gas

    Adventure beckons! From a horror scene this'll turn into a detective or buddy cop mystery, where the God of Life and the God of Magic hop into a van and ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.3 - Red Gas

    WHAT 'N TARNATION WAS THIS HULLA BA LOO okay, but I'll be honest, this was complete and total tonal dissonance and I actually really appreciated it. "Look! Away from the ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.2 - Red Gas

    Okay, so this was pretty interesting. At this point I'm just going to throw all my questions out the window and assume "This world is completely different from ours and ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Satire, Realistic Re: Journey to the Promised Land

    Okay, I'll be honest with you, I have no idea how to feel about this story. I know it's based off your own experiences after graduating, and I respect that, ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Another tale about Sammer

    Okay, so I'll split my review up to Potential Positives and Things to Work On, because there's a lot of bot here. I'll break the bad news first, since it's ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My Friend, The Painting (Edited)

    Gah, am I happy with this. It's such a childish story, but again, I can totally see a younger version of myself reading this and enjoying it immensely. Some things ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Art is Emotion

    Hey there. I'd personally file this under "Articles" as it doesn't follow the usual narrative structure of a short story--it's more of an opinion piece than anything, something I would ...

    Mar 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My Friend, The Painting (Part 3)

    Ooh. Good ending. Though I would much rather have more interaction with the girls of Edelweiss before the story actually began, I now understand the intention of leaving Eliza with ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    Because even as we speak, she still craves for another crepe to eat. Hey, don't kinkshame the girl. She can have as many crepes as she wants, who are you ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My Friend, The Painting (Part 2)

    Ooh. This was actually pretty good, but not good enough to be free of criticism. Seeing the whole thing in action (though it isn't the conclusion, it does feel like ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My Friend, The Painting (Part 1)

    The trope of paintings being portals into another world is actually not a remarkable concept, but something I feel like could definitely be used in fun ways. I haven't seen ...

    Mar 16, 2017


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