SuicideKing

Akira: You probably shouldn't be so crass in your dealings with members. If I understand correctly, insults are not to be flung in the forums. You're being unnecessarily standoffish. That ...

Ps: Did anyone actually figure out the secrets that Akira hid in the notes to Yoko? Of course. The capital letters in the messages stand out like hippies in a ...

Agreed @ Dream Deep. When the critiques that follow the story are many times longer than the piece itself, there may be something wrong. I believe this is the case. ...

Church. My comments from part 1 stands. I also think you should combine the two parts; prologues are rarely a two-part affair, and they are short enough that combining them ...