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Thanks for the review! I agree with your advice completely and you've definitely been very helpful! Happy New Year!

Thanks for the review. I'm finishing up the first draft now and I might not post any further than the next chapter. Chapter one of draft two will be up, ...

Thanks. I'm already working on editing the book, so the first draft of chapter one will definitely be up by the end of the year. I think it's a lot ...

Thanks for the response. I'm glad you liked it:)

Thanks for the review! You're right. The chapter is pretty scattered and it is partially because I'm still trying to iron out the overall plot. I think the point of ...

Hey! I just ended up here by chance, but I like action and adventure, so maybe I'll stick around for a while. Where do I begin? I like the writing ...

Thanks for the review. I will fix that paragraph as soon as possible. It was just a copying error.

Actually, it was a reference to Lemony Snicket's The Penultimate Peril, but that was a reference to Moby Dick, so indirectly, yes.

Thanks! It actually was for Matt Smith. He's my favorite. But you're right. Political correctness is in my way. But what about Amy? She was like eleven. I mean, he ...

Thnaks for the tips and the information. I actually wrote this story before any of the twelfth doctor's seasons came out, so it's definitely not continuous.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate all of your input. I do think Jack's friends are a pretty weird group of guys, but I wanted to bring ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'm still trying to figure out exactly what the story is about; right now I have a general idea, but nothing solid, so feedback ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! I assume I can call you Che? I'm glad you liked it. This chapter is really where it starts to pick up steam, so don't worry ...

Thanks for the review! I assume I can call you Che? I'm glad you liked it. This chapter is really where it starts to pick up steam, so don't worry ...