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Beautiful. Only thing I can suggest is tinkering with the line about the airport. It seems a bit redundant. Amazing work.

Hang in there bud :)

Thats nice. This is nice. :)

Hi! Thank you for sharing your work with me. While I do love reviewing your work I would rather not be tagged in them. I may not have enough time ...

XD didn't realize this came off as edgy. Thanks for your review.

Great closing line. Otherwise it feels like an outline for a poem. There is plenty of feeling but not much else. Try describing existing feelings in different ways. Keep writing!

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You cannot write a poem while only looking at one aspect of emotion. Simply put, you cannot write an evocative piece (such as what you aimed to do here) by ...

As a writer I believe you have a great idea. However, your ideas need a proper format. I usually do not comment on format but one cannot deny that it ...

Amazing work. You give such visceral details that paints a detailed image with just a couple lines. Your 4th stanza does lack a bit of feeling although I couldn't tell ...

Very nice. Beautiful use of metaphor and imagery. It is a bit vague though. Try explaining what happened and how. I'm sure this would make your work much more evocative.

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Quite nice. Well done