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Re: The Harvest - Chapter 3
This is very well written. However, I did find some little mistakes. In "Usually it’s fairly busy." There should be a comma after 'usually'. The sentence "How could it turn ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 2)
I really like your writing style, the sentences flow really well and it keeps the plot interesting. However, I did find a couple of little mistakes. I think you added ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: The Prince of Heaven and Hell (Chapter 3- Died For Perfection)
I really like this chapter and the cliffhanger is pretty baller, but there are some little mistakes I noticed. I think the opening sentence: "Glitch couldn't make any sense with ...
Jul 20, 2020