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Yes, I avoid it as well. I created the contest. I hope people join, I always love to see what people come up with ^^ Anyone and everyone is welcome ...

Thank you for the comment, remember it's just a draft. I already know that much but, thanks for telling me it was confusing. It might be because you don't understand ...

please help me, I need advice and suggestions. Anything will help weather it be harsh or nice I'd love any thoughts.

thank you chirantha I took some of your suggestions while editing. Anyone else? If so please be truthful and tell me if it's bad or not okay? Thanks you guys ...

Thanks everyone for taking your precious time to read my work :) I'm so happy you liked it, be sure to tell me if you have any suggestions. Thanks again! ...

Thank you for the great reviews I have looked over it and I'm not particularly too proud of it myself. I'm a perfectionist so I always end up hating my ...

Wow thanks for the great advice, I'll definitely work on that. I'll be sure to make it longer when i edit it just for you lordgluzman :D I'm so happy ...

I know I'm double posting but, please give me a review :( I love creative criticism please help me make it better.