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Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes
Good day xGraceex, I found this poem really heartwarming, it reminded me of being smaller. But i never wore makeup and probably never will haha. I'm Oh-natural :lol:. I'm actually ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Sixty Miles
Good day CoolCatElly, I must agree with everyone else poetry is a must for being able to describe itself. When i first read it i was really lost and didn't ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Sighs
I find this spectacularly emotional and deep, it definitely makes people think. I noticed some wrong tense usage but, I'm not one to base writing on that kind of stuff. ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: fall
I believe it was really beautiful it definitely got to me. I like telling stories through poetry as well, for your first time i think you did superb. Though if ...
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: The murderous suicide
Same as the person above you did misspell fade but, other then that I really liked it. The vibe was perfect and it really reached out to me, and yes ...
Sep 20, 2008 -
Re: The Tempest
I found it very intriguing, I do poetry like you at least somewhat the same :] A lot of people don't like that it doesn't rhyme but, I find that ...
Sep 16, 2008
