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Thanks for the review. I was pretty sure it wouldn't make much sense to anyone at all. It was fun to write and I hope it was fun to read. ...

Thank you. I enjoyed reading what you got out of it. Your suggestions were helpful and I've never really thought of choosing the rhythm quite that way before. Thanks again ...

This feels so honest.

Thanks for the review. I am terrible with punctuation. I'll clean it up. I'm not sure how to change the line at the end of the first stanza. It says ...

Thank you for your review. I've lost so many people to drug abuse and to be honest I detest it. Thanks again!

Thanks I will attempt a rewrite. I think you're right about the message not being clear enough. During the time I was writing it, I was dripping my heart onto ...

Thank you so much for the reviews. Very Helpful. Rachel ~ I thought it was short too but it said everything I wanted it to, so I ended it. Jabber ...

I really liked this. "I can hear the smile on your face,when you laugh out loud." Was my favorite line. Why is anyone ever in a hurry to grow up?