Stigma

Good poem, good concept, just a few tiny little mistakes: so I turn on my night light to *maybe see my shadow, (common mistake) And eventually I fall also do. ...

This is very well written, and I do think it's something you should expand on. Good work. ^^

This is a nice little poem, but usually, you should space your lines when writing poetry. Can you picture? Someone fighting for their life. Can you hear? The screams pounding ...