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Re: Blood on Snow
I have to agree with ShadowTwit when it comes to how spooky this piece is... But I liked it. The Good Things: - Well written, it got a little confusing ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: In the Dead of Winter
Really all I have to say is good, though there are a few things that can be added but not for lack of a great writer. The Good Things: - ...
Sep 13, 2007 -
Re: Prologue - *title unknown*
Ummm... Very Interesting. I liked it overall good plot, characters need a little work I'd like to read a little more about them. A little background info would be nice ...
Jul 15, 2007 -
Re: Chapter One (Stranger's Entrance) of Archer's Legend
I got to say Awesome story, but (yes I know the terrible but) it's very ordinary, well your main character is at times. I mean I've read so many stories ...
Jul 10, 2007 -
Re: Wolf Riders: Prologue
OK Let me talk to you about paragraphs. When someone new talks, you don't write it like this: "blah blah blah," Said person number one. "Blah blah blah," said person ...
Jan 20, 2006