Stephjd9

Yes. I have crushes on my characters all the time. And if it's not ok we can be rebels together :) And yes, you should definitely use that. Sibling-zoned is ...

I kinda feel like I'm too nice to do reviews... ;) I can never think of anything bad to say. I guess that means I'm not too great at constructive ...

Thanks! This is all helpful and I've already started to revise using some of it! I totally get what you're trying to say in those awkward parts :) THANKS again ...

YAY! And thanks! This is all helpful stuff and I'll be sure to add some of this to my chapter! Thanks, I like you're stuff too so maybe that is ...

YAY!!! That makes me happy!!! :D

Thanks so much! I agree and I'll definitely remember to add extra detail when I revise this chapter! Thanks for the feedback! (and the follow!)

Thanks for this review! This stuff is definitely helpful and I've already begun to revise it, taking into consideration the 'one big issue' you mentioned. When I read through it ...

Also, I am quite new to YWS and this is my first post so I wasn't sure of what to do for the rating. What would you suggest: probably 12 ...

Hey, pretzelsing! Thanks so much for this review! I found it very helpful! I do agree that people may think it's going to be a same-sex relationship, I really like ...

Thanks so much for this feedback! I'll definitely take this into consideration. I totally agree that I could use a lot more description! Thanks again!!