StarsForEyes

I found this piece to be really heartfelt and relatable! I personally really related to the theme of escape in this poem and the theme of waiting for the right ...

Okay, right away, I love the strong, consistent characterization of Andrea. The "forcing herself out of bed," and the throwing away of the cereal, and the hand in her pockets ...

I liked this. It made me feel things. Okay, but really, I loved the imagery and the persistent metaphor of the stars. I think that it was a great choice ...

This is so sincere and poignant and relatable. So many small details have private meaning or are inside jokes, and this adds so much more emotional depth to the piece. ...

I loved how raw and emotional this was! The way you focused on physical sensations towards the end really got me. The varying sentence lengths were jarring and added something ...

You did a great job of maintaining a surreal, somber atmosphere throughout the entire story. I really loved that! I loved the little details you mention to convey your atmosphere ...