Starhunter

Hey! Cool, a superhero story. :) I like your intro- you jump right into the story. And you really cover right away one of the things that is very intrinsic ...

Wow- this is amazing! Your descriptions are excellent, from beginning to end. They really drew me into the story, which in and of itself was intriguing. There is an air ...

Okay, let's see.... Well. This MC is a very emotional person. I can feel the violent ups-and-downs her life is taking. (Why am I saying "her"? I'm just gonna stick ...

Wow, very powerful here! I can definitely feel the emotion here; your anger and frustration come clear. My only suggestion would be (and this is only a suggestion, when it ...

Loved this series, but the first one is probably my favorite. :) The others... well, it definetly gets worse before it gets better for the characters. I liked how there ...

All right, so here's my review: Paragraph 1: You might want to rephrase "somewhat boring, but towards the end..." Like, you could say it took a while to get into ...

Hey! Just a quick foreword- I've never read "Gone with the Wind," although I did see the movie. (I know, I know, not the same) The first paragraph isn't quite ...

Wow, this is really nice- I like it. :) I like how you're kind of expressing the hidden pain people feel, and I get a cold, broken feeling (in a ...

Very nice! I see this is part of a larger story, but still, just reading this I am already caught up in the story. I really like Nastusia's character, how ...