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Re: Pinch Me Chpt. Two
This is very good! I'm just going to use this one to review both chapter 1&2. First of all, the grammar, punctuation and spelling is very good, and the plot ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: The Water Sisters: Chapter Two
Poor Lee. Having no one to talk to. The writing is very good, and the plot structure is clear. I liked it alot as it gives a clear view of ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: ES+GP (prolog)
A very good prologue. I think this shows up the superficial way people expect royalty to be and how this family overcomes it. Probably a strong matriarchal role in the ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
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A very interesting ending to chapter 5. I liked the whole of the story so far, but I only decided to comment on the last chapter you have written so ...
Oct 13, 2011