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That makes more sense, thanks for clarifying. ^^

Thank you very much for reading it and taking the time to comment. Thanks so much for the praise! ^^ I however am not sure how this came across as ...

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I appreciate it. ^^ Glad you enjoyed the piece.

I like it, It's very interesting. Leaves a lot to the imagination. Makes me wonder what the story behind it is. Keep up the good work :)

It's suppose to represent you talking to yourself, there is no other person. It also has nothing to do with love. Sometimes when you are thinking you kind of repeat ...

Thank you so much for your kind words! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it that much. :D

Well it might be a bit cliche, but it's not like everything I write is cliche. If you think about it you can't really say much in this world that ...

As an answer to those questions, I left it up for the reader to decide. It can be between any two people or just the dream of someone thinking about ...

Don't worry you did not offend me. Also yes I agree with your point that it should be changed to "we" perhaps. When I was first writing this my thought ...