SporkPunk

Hey SuperSquirrel! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing today. :D I only have one real nitpick, and that's something the previous reviewer mentioned. The random monologue in the middle of ...

Hey nenc! I'm Sporks. :D Or Leslie. Haha. I'm here to review this! What caught my attention is the title. I love Assassin's Creed. And the title made me think ...

Hey TH vampire! SporkPunk here for a review :D Nitpicks 10:00 AM, Saturday radio: Now we're gonna play a special request from one of our listeners: Attention by Tokio Hotel. ...

Hey Austenite! :D Sporks here for a review. Grammar Okay, so overall, this isn't bad. Your tenses are correct, descriptions are good, spacing is spot-on. Good job! One tiny nitpick ...

Hi Sassykat! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. :D Grammar Okay, from what I could tell, your grammar is decent. Only thing I really picked up on was ...

Hiya MArio! :D I'm SporkPunk but you can call me Sporks. Or Leslie. Your call. xD Anyway, before I begin, I must say, "OH MY GOSH YAY ZOMBIES!" :) *ahem.* ...

Hey Timmie! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this piece. :D Grammar Overall, your grammar was decent. Just a few nitpicks though. One, when you are using "too" to mean ...

Hiya, Flower. Sporks here for a review. :D Now onto the review part. Green is word choice change, red is grammar, blue is my commentary. After looking into his deep ...

Hi Nike! Cool username, by the way. :) I'm SporkPunk, and I'll do the honors. Okay, so grammar. You said you wrote this without thinking much, and it shows. There ...

Hey! So you can call me SporkPunk, and I'm here to review. So you have other versions of this on YWS? Okay, so green means word choice changes, red is ...

I figured if I was gonna review two of the three parts, I might as well review the third. And here goes. You know what my color code means. :D ...

Hi again! xD Okay, so I couldn't find anything grammatical to correct. Your tenses are all the same, nothing appears to be misspelled, stuff like that. And your word choice---couldn't ...

Quillie! :D I haven't read your other chapters yet, but I saw you had 40+ views and no review. I hate when that happens. Green is word choice change if ...

Hi! SporkPunk here! I haven't read the other scenes yet, but I plan to. I noticed you didn't have a review for this yet. Lee was brought to full consciousness, ...

Hiya bElL3! SporkPunk here for the review. So, overall: I thought it was a good idea, but I found it difficult to follow and immerse myself in. Is there a ...