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Hi there! I'll review this today. Grammar: "The Tavern , " h e said. He looked at his watch. "Logan should already be here. Ah, there he is." Logan was ...

Hi Jade! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I cannot be beautiful if no one can see me. I like this! My eyelids sprouted rigid wrinkles as I ...

Hi Jash! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Now, this piece is rather lengthy, so rather than going through and picking out everything I can find, I'll give you ...

Hello Teddybear! I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this today. Grammar It was mostly good. I couldn't find to much of anything to nitpick, though this might be something worth ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. :D Grammar stuff: As far as I could tell, the tenses were good, and overall the grammar was good. Oh, ...

Ben! Hi! I don't know if I can review this well, but I will give some general comments. 1. Voice---I loved it! 2. Tone---Seems like you enjoyed writing this, right? ...

Hey there, Rain. I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. Technical blahblahblah: "I wish i could! But i just dont think i can take the pain. The knife i ...

Hi there, PadrePio! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. Grammar: I could find nothing inherently wrong with the piece, so good there. All the tenses, the spelling, even the ...

Hey! First off, in general, I really like the idea of this poem. It's quite original. :D The only thing I didn't really like about it was the repetition. Sometimes, ...

Hey there! I'm going to attempt to review this. First off, great piece. I love the imagery you both used, the word choice, pretty much everything. I wish I could ...

Hi Seana, I don't really think this is working. I'm not going to "nag" as you put it, but I will say a few things. I can see that you ...

Hey SilentOllie, This poem was pretty good, as far as the idea goes. The speaker's tone is communicated well, and the mood is also, somewhat. However, there are some things ...

Hey silentpages! You can call me Sporky. :smt001 I'll be reviewing this today. before it was time to ditch it "It" here is ambiguous; it could be either in reference ...

Hey princess! Sorry this took so long, but I got buried under a pile of English so high I almost got lost forever. Hahaha. Anyway, on to the review. Seemingly ...

Hi Jon! I'm Sporks and I'll take a stab at reviewing this. I really like the flow of this piece, the word choice and the imagery. For your imagery, I ...