Spook

I liked the concept and the image with feeding her pain to the wolves (I just LOVED that). The punctuation seems forced and repetetive, more to follow the rules than ...

MUST...READ...MORE!!!!! Your writing style is fluid and beautiful and I've been sucked into this. One issue is the fact that Harmony is aa girls' name and I find it difficult ...

Stranger will you help me? I like how the only other person is 'stranger' I can’t quite recall who I am. In the mirror I see, damage of my scam. ...

Hey Socks. You just had to go and flatter me in the private message and make me feel guilty if I didn't immediately read this, didn't you? Of course. Anywho ...

Hey this was a really good piece, here are my comments: I'm trapped in this dream, Of sand dust and mirages. Of dark crusted blood, Of sinister images. Of broken ...

This was an entertaining piece. The way you began each stanza maintained interest throughout your poem and it makes me glad that I've never had a strict father figure. Even ...

Yeah I definitely agree wuth Amelia, putting it in the center of the page ans spacing it out would have a stronger effect than being pushed together to the side. ...