Spitfire

Hey there RS! Well since I already read the chapter, there's no need for me to comment on it again... As for errors, I think the other two basically mentioned ...

Ha ha, so far the first one to reply :wink: When the crystals came to the villages, the villagers were able to call upon the magic to have their washing ...

I haven't read the first chapter you'd written, so I'm basing myself on this one only... Instead, she continued to hum that Beatles song, and I stared at her at ...

Hey there! I was just browsing like that and saw this was a first chapter, so I've decided to review :lol: Here I go... He slowly stood up , barely ...

Aw crap! RH got here before me! Lol! Here I go... Some clothes was delivered for you, take a shower Were? It was an average d sized room with a ...

Okay, here I am for a little review time! I honestly don't have any nitpicks, I didn't see anything wrong. Yay! Other than that, I liked the chapter. There wasn't ...

Hey there! Well I just stumbled across your first chapter, so here I go to review! And she didn’t. Calimyr rode hard until she could hear the bustle of the ...

Finally! :wink: Here I go.... The voice belonged to a short, plump woman who detached herself from her the crowd. We walked up the stone stairs leading to the open ...

Hey there RH! I thought I had read this one since you hadn't posted in a while, but decided to check and saw this was a new one :lol: So ...

Hey there, I know it took me awhile, but I'm here to review! I just got a few nitpicks... Melissa took a look around. It has been so long since ...

Just finished part 1, so here I go for part 2! The water renewed both Anna and Celine, and they were in a rather good mood s , so Anna ...

Hey there! Sorry it took me so long to comment, but I'm here to do it now... “And will you please make him stop crying so loud? He acts such ...

Hey there TH! Sorry it took so long to comment, I've been really busy lately. So here I go... Then, they turned backs carefully, they saw a soldier holding Milhad ...

Okay, well since I had already commented on the original chapter of this one, I'll just add one thing :lol: : I haven’t been able to follow any else life ...