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Re: Icefire - part 8
ALRIIIIIGHT! Part 8 here I come!! Lynn, Amber, and Peter stood in front of the old man, who frowned at them. “Well?” he said. “You asked about the Gem, I ...
Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:16 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 19 - OLD
All right... Well since I'd already read this before it was posted, I don't have anything else to add. I'm glad you followed my advice and removed the whole chit ...
Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:59 am -
Re: Dearly Beloved
Okay; conflicting emotions here. A part of me thinks it's sweet how much he loves his wife and won't let her go. The other part is totally creep-ed out. This ...
Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:48 pm -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (7)
Hey hey! I'm first.. wasn't expecting that 8) On to the review... He looked up at her. “Tell her Kieran disappeared while on a mission and we may need her ...
Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:07 pm -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (6) Part Two
Oh man, poor you, your computer's dying :( that stinks Well I've finally gotten to reviewing part 2, so... here...I....go! Well Tanya already said most of my thoughts about this ...
Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:15 pm -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (6) Part One
Okay, this really sticks. Not the story, I mean. Yesterday I'd done the whole post, but when it came time to submit it, the site bugged, and I couldn't get ...
Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:22 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 18 - OLD
Another one so quick...you really are on a roll... I was a constant disappointment to him because he thought me weak for always fighting him; for refusing to kill the ...
Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:42 pm -
Re: Icefire - part 7
I, for one, am quite glad that she asked for more chapters! I was actually wondering about it too and then Tanya told me she'd PM'd you. Very happy :D ...
Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:23 pm -
Re: X
Okay so I haven't read any of the previous Eventides, so my review is purely on this one... Mother returned to the kitchen with an armful of medicines which clattered ...
Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:48 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 17 - OLD
Okay, time to see what your big surprise is!! “We’re sorry boss,” Blondie stammered. “We’d been so frustrated about disappointing you in our failure to capture Shayna and I guess ...
Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:17 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 16 - OLD
Two chapters in one day that others beat me to! Man, I'm losing my touch! :wink: For a few blissful minutes following my arousing , I didn’t think of anything ...
Tue Jun 01, 2010 10:15 pm -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (5)
Alright, so she beat me to it. I can give her this one. :smt002 On to nit-picking... If Kerr had been paying attention he would have seen her coming, but ...
Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:33 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 15 - OLD
I'm first. MOUHAHAHAHAHAHA! .... Sorry. On to nit-picking. It shall be done it aqua. :D “Maybe it’s in there genes,” Riley answered. “After all, I can do it; it’s in ...
Wed May 26, 2010 9:20 pm -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (4)
All right, my magnifying glass is in hands and so I am ready to review! All of the famous names of the Black Dragons were on it. He’d even sent ...
Fri May 21, 2010 6:52 pm -
Re: My guardian dog 14 - OLD
Still first? Cool 8) On to nit-picking... I didn’t know if he actually has an agent, he didn’t mention whether it was a man or a woman and really, I ...
Thu May 20, 2010 10:18 pm
