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Re: Icefire - part 8
ALRIIIIIGHT! Part 8 here I come!! Lynn, Amber, and Peter stood in front of the old man, who frowned at them. “Well?” he said. “You asked about the Gem, I ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 19 - OLD
All right... Well since I'd already read this before it was posted, I don't have anything else to add. I'm glad you followed my advice and removed the whole chit ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Dearly Beloved
Okay; conflicting emotions here. A part of me thinks it's sweet how much he loves his wife and won't let her go. The other part is totally creep-ed out. This ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (7)
Hey hey! I'm first.. wasn't expecting that 8) On to the review... He looked up at her. “Tell her Kieran disappeared while on a mission and we may need her ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (6) Part Two
Oh man, poor you, your computer's dying :( that stinks Well I've finally gotten to reviewing part 2, so... here...I....go! Well Tanya already said most of my thoughts about this ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (6) Part One
Okay, this really sticks. Not the story, I mean. Yesterday I'd done the whole post, but when it came time to submit it, the site bugged, and I couldn't get ...
Jun 13, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 18 - OLD
Another one so quick...you really are on a roll... I was a constant disappointment to him because he thought me weak for always fighting him; for refusing to kill the ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: Icefire - part 7
I, for one, am quite glad that she asked for more chapters! I was actually wondering about it too and then Tanya told me she'd PM'd you. Very happy :D ...
Jun 6, 2010 -
Re: X
Okay so I haven't read any of the previous Eventides, so my review is purely on this one... Mother returned to the kitchen with an armful of medicines which clattered ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 17 - OLD
Okay, time to see what your big surprise is!! “We’re sorry boss,” Blondie stammered. “We’d been so frustrated about disappointing you in our failure to capture Shayna and I guess ...
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 16 - OLD
Two chapters in one day that others beat me to! Man, I'm losing my touch! :wink: For a few blissful minutes following my arousing , I didn’t think of anything ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (5)
Alright, so she beat me to it. I can give her this one. :smt002 On to nit-picking... If Kerr had been paying attention he would have seen her coming, but ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 15 - OLD
I'm first. MOUHAHAHAHAHAHA! .... Sorry. On to nit-picking. It shall be done it aqua. :D “Maybe it’s in there genes,” Riley answered. “After all, I can do it; it’s in ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (4)
All right, my magnifying glass is in hands and so I am ready to review! All of the famous names of the Black Dragons were on it. He’d even sent ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: My guardian dog 14 - OLD
Still first? Cool 8) On to nit-picking... I didn’t know if he actually has an agent, he didn’t mention whether it was a man or a woman and really, I ...
May 20, 2010
