SpiritedWolfe

Hi Koozar! Welcome to the site :) I just wanted to leave you a quick note that here it typically helps to break up your story into chapters and post ...

Oh, no, your review was fine! (but it's good to know that detail, haha.) I'm always just looking for criticism to improve, which was why I asked for elaboration :)

Thanks for your thoughts and review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it ^^ Was there anything you found confusing or difficult to follow?

Hello! Thanks for your thoughts and the review :) To give some context, the Chernobyl disaster occurred in 1986 when a nuclear powerplant near this small town had a meltdown ...

At least it's something you recognize and are working to fix! ^^ I still really enjoyed it regardless.

Thank you so much for this lovely review xDD //I haven't received a review in ... months xD Thanks for your comments on this poem though! I haven't thought about ...

Hey, I get that! I know how hard it is xD There's a lot more that goes into it than you think, but with lots of practice I'm confident that ...

You probably don't have to go back and start rewriting until finished with the first draft. It's okay to have problems in the first draft and idea if things you'd ...

Hey, I can get behind not introducing the names right off the bat, but when you do introduce them, maybe try to do it through the dialogue instead of simply ...

No, thanks. I don't think this type of novel is for me. But I wish you the best of luck continuing with it ~ And hopefully you'll find someone to ...

I was aware that the title said "Chapter 1". I was just giving my impressions and that may give you some idea of how your ideas come across through the ...

I recognize I have room for growth, but this is a work of mine done at a young age that I no longer find interest in. As I have already ...

Regardless. This feedback is not helpful because I have already grown since this was written.

Thanks for your review. However, this was a poem I wrote four years ago and critique in it is no longer helpful.

I intentionally left it without capitals and the punctuation would be considered "usual" as this is poetry and grammatical rules are not completely rigid. Most of your word suggestions take ...