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Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 23
Hi Mea! I've got a second review for you today :3 Let's jump right in. My first comment was related to the first line :P So, I wasn't much of ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 22
Hi Mea! Let's get into it ^^ I'll start with the line comments, and then give some more of my impressions of the chapter. She would not die like her ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 21
Hi Mea! The daily review strikes again :3 This was another really good addition to the novel! Of course, as it's the first chapter of a new part, our characters ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire, Interlude: An Old Kind of Magic
Hi Mea! Here's your daily review ^^ I love these interludes you include between both of the parts that give us more insight into what's happening in Iona's part of ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 20
Hi Mea! Back again ^^ I've already told you this, but this was a phenomenal chapter. It grabs your attention right from the start and holds on tight. I loved ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 19
Hi Mea! Back at it again ^^ Let's get right into it :3 Broken stone rained down on Fyn, dust showering his snout and pebbles pouring into his nose as ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 18
Hi, Mea! Here is your daily review :3 Let's jump right in. I'll start off with my line comments and give more general impressions after ^^ A trickle of blood ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 17, Part 2
Hi Mea! It's RevMo, and I've promised you some reviews >:3 Get ready for some daily review spam. I recall reading this chapter a while ago, since I was curious ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 17, Part 1
Hi Mea! :) Back at it again, slowly chipping away at chapters. Let's get right into it! That was their rightful home — before the Treatise, humans had selfishly stood ...
Aug 9, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 16
Hi Mea! Here to leave an official review, since I already gave you some of my initial reactions :3 First of all, I loved this section. It was yet another ...
Jul 25, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 15
Hi again! Let's get right into the review :) I wanted to start off by saying that this was yet another solid installment. As each of the reviewers have said ...
Jul 19, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 14
Oh my. I'm getting quite behind, aren't I? xD Time to pick up the reviewing, then. ^^ I mentioned to you before that this is going to be a shorter ...
Jul 17, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 13
Hi Mea! I anticipate that this will be a shorter review because I don't have that much I want to say. This just upped the stakes in a huge way, ...
Jun 20, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 12
Hi Mea! I have returned :) I wanted to start off by echoing a point that Plume made in their last chapter. I always really enjoy your chapters and writing ...
Jun 19, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 11
Hi Mea! As you can see, if I say I will do something "tomorrow", I actually mean "two days from now" xD But I'm here now! So, to start off, ...
Jun 8, 2021
