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Re: The Shadow's Children Chapter 1 and 2
Wow! Amazing. I swear you'd better get this published once it's completed! I will buy it in a heartbeat. After reading the Hush Hush and Fallen Series, I've been a ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 5
That was not a bad filler. Obviously, the ending was great. The cliffhanger was good: alluring but vague, appetizing and alert. The only thing I have a problem with is ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: All I wanted was Closure
Wow! The imagery and diction was powerful, raw, and vivid! Definitely an eye-opener. The title is misleading and if that was your goal then you met it hands down. The ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Words
The ending was unexpected and clever. Impressed with your ability to create a consistent rhyme without using basic rhyming pairs like "you" and "do". Compliments for using both the subjective ...
Jun 14, 2014