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Thanks, Mad. I'm not quite as happy with this for some reason, but I think working on later chapters and coming back to it will help

Thanks, Mad! My problem is I generally lose patience with pieces longer than about 500 words or so. *eyes my two unfinished novels*

Thanks everyone! I always swap tenses... it's annoying, because I can never catch it! I'll fix those little errors, and try to iron out difference between her father and her ...

Thanks for the comments everybody! I might be posting a second short story of mine in a few days. I don't like it as much though hehe

Thanks guys! Yep, it's an old work. I revised it since then though. Thanks again