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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Redemption Value #2

    This was a really great poem! I really enjoyed the way the poem rythmed but how it did not rythme the whole time but still went smoothly and flowed really ...

    Feb 18, 2011


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites