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Re: Grinding Gears - Chapter 1
Wow this is really good. I like the transition between Isaac and Vince, and how both of them get an equal amount of expressions and emotions throughout the piece. I ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: A Girl and the Boy
Okay I'll say it here, I'm not a romance reader at all, but this was interesting. I saw it on the front page and thought that I would take a ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: lost in hometown wonderland
Very nice intro. I really liked the deep details and descriptiveness throughout. I never felt as if there was detail, then a back off of fast action, I like that. ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
Well this is really good so far. I like the detail at the beginning, but I would like to know what happened to the girl to make her hair white ...
Apr 8, 2013