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Re: Use Somebody-Kings of Leon Parody (She don't deserve Jacob)
This is good! I love Kings Of Leon and used to love Twilight. All the lyrics fit too! :D
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
Haha!!! This is BRILLIANT! :smt005
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: LakeView - Chapter 1
Haha it makes more sense now. :)
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: More from Serpent Riddle... Ivan the Drunk :D Enjoy!
Hello Esme, Thank you so much for reviewing that! It's so nice to get a review that actually includes some praise as well as the critical stuff! :D You mentioned ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Introduction Of My Novel :) - Serpent Riddle
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review that, you have made some really useful points! Firstly, you mentioned that I tell rather than show and that I need ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: More from Serpent Riddle... Ivan the Drunk :D Enjoy!
Hi Maddy, Thank you for taking the time to review this. You have mentioned that I 'tell the story' rather than 'show what's going on' and that I should use ...
Apr 1, 2010