Sophia_x

Hey guys, this is the first chapter of my first novel. It wod be great if you could give me some tips and advice for how to improve and just ...

Hey:)Some of you might have read this before because i posted this when there were no corrections. I have now added a small paragraph at the beginning and corrected my ...

hey allthis is a section quite a bit through my book but im unsure on it so please tell me what you think. Lots of comments are welcome.Thank you Blackness. ...

I stand here aloneAn empty space beside meCold airThe place where you should beBut you are not hereYou did not comeYou left me to face lifeAlonePeople are watching meThey cannot ...

heythis is an excerpt from my novel. I have already posted this scene but this version is a vast change to the other. Please tell me what you think. Thanks ...

Hi y'all okay this is a chapter later on in my novel. before u ask why i dont post from the beginning its cos i kinda write random parts when ...

Prologue No one said life was easy. Of course it wasn’t otherwise people wouldn’t keep dying of poverty, there would be no gun crime and there would be a lower ...

Hey, please can you review because it would be very helpful . xThe rain splashed hard against the pavement. The dark sky clouded over London as night reigned in and ...

Still hereI fall into a world that doesn’t want to catch meIt blackens as it fades awayLeaving just traces of hope and loveSpeaking of words no one wants to sayIt ...

Hey :)i know this excerpt doesn't really make sense because its part way through my novel but it was the first time the two main characters - Lexie and Alistair ...