Sonlen

Erm... that wasn't Kang, it was me.... Check the username....

Just so everyone knows, this has never been edited. The reason there is one edit shown is because I removed a lot of it. Explained in second or third post. ...

Yes, I saw the "longling" part too. Anyway, I think that this could make a great series of poems that tell the story of the characters, maybe something like, "The ...

You have to visit the site to get the full thing, and a lot of things are explained later. You might want to specify what I need to fix before ...

This is really good! The only improvements I can think of have already been stated.