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Thank you, I will look into that. I was trying to figure out the bully's personality myself so I will try to improve on that. Thank you for the feedback!

Thank you! Some of the words were supposed to be italicized, so I went back and fixed that if you want to see.

Best review ever :)

I agree that this poem is quite long, but I was trying to get every detail from that experience on paper. I wasn't trying to make it poetic, exactly, I ...

I wrote some background info above if that helps you at all. Thanks for the feedback!

To other people reading this and who are confused, here is some background to this poem. One night last winter, my friend and I had a crazy teenager thought: We ...

Lol thank you. I applaud noisily back.

Thank you! I am glad that you liked it, that was exactly what I was looking to do! :) Yes, please share with others!

Oh, cool. Thanks! :) I have never researched determinism. I will look into it. Thanks!

Hi NiteOwl! I really enjoyed this. Do you have music to go with it? I would like to know more background on the song (not written into the song, just ...