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Hm okay. I didn't want to put his real name there because it's his secret identity and all that, but I get that names are confusing. I was hoping that ...

Hey Carlito! Thank you so much for the awesome review. :) I'm so glad you like the concept and the interactions! I was so excited to get into Eli's head ...

Wow, thanks for the awesome review, Mea! You helped me a lot. When I was writing this, I was so concerned about being info-dumpy that I think I went too ...

Thank you so much! I really like it when super-powered people experience unique weaknesses in their powers that they have to work around, rather than having all the convenience of ...

My boys are HOLDING HANDS

Yes! This year has been insane with first year of college and two new siblings and whatnot, but I'm on summer break now, btw. So let me know if you ...

I am, definitely! And maybe then I could actually make an effort to give you feedback, haha

Aww, bummer. I liked the cryptid, but I get why it's gone. I'm really interested to see what stays and what goes in your future drafts!

Ooh. This is an interesting development. I like how you approached it! Random thing that just occurred to me: what happened to the cryptid from earlier? Was it forgotten? As ...

Thank you for this incredible review! I will definitely keep those comments in mind. If I'm honest I don't know what kelp is supposed to mean either, lol. It's just ...

Thanks for the review! I agree that there's a bit of an emotional disconnect, and I think it's primarily because I don't know who Marisol is very well yet! This ...

Aah thank you so much!!

Only if you want to. :)

I am veeery suspicious of Dan right now now. Just to add my voice to the mix. I wasn't really until this chapter but now I most definitely am. Enjoying ...

I love how you humanize your villains. It's possibly my favorite part of your writing; everyone is human. They can still be awful and you can still hate what they ...