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Thanks for the review! :)

Thank you! :)

Not helpful. Please review for real next time.

Thanks for this amazing review! It's incredibly helpful. I appreciate it and I'm pleased you like the poem! :)

Hey fort! Thanks so much for the review. I'm honored that you showed it to your parents and that you liked it. I appreciate the feedback and I'll take it ...

Thanks for the lovely review! You made great points. The blank in "______ is an abandoned child" is where I would put his real name, but since I posted this ...

Thanks for the review! I have a few clarifications. This poem was about the waiting period between getting my brother from China and first learning about him, and how excruciating ...

Thank you so much for the lovely suggestions! :)

Thank you! This is a very old poem haha but thanks again! :)

Thanks for the suggestions, niteowl. I really appreciate them and I'll take that into account! :) The reason why the end focused so heavily on the elephants is that my ...

Ohhhh. XD The puddle part makes sense now. No problem! :)

Thank you! I'm so glad you felt that way. :)

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for the suggestions! :)

It's all good. ^-^ Thanks for understanding.