Sonder

Hey Blue! As always, I adore this story and your writing style.

Here I am at the end, after so long! What an adventure. ^-^ This chapter was nicely paced, I think, and it felt better to me than the previous chapter. ...

Hello Ganga! Last day with this. I can't believe it! I just looked back and I've been following this story since August 2014. o.o Isn't that crazy? What a journey. ...

Hola Ganga. So I think the previous reviewers have already said what I think of this chapter, which is that it feels pretty slow and not very significant. If I'm ...

Heya. I keep trying to come up with new greetings, haha. Getting old? Alright let's dig in. New perspective! Woot! Wow, how many chapters were we with only Alex? Quite ...

Hey for the 100th time, haha. What a roller coaster of a chapter! Wow. I loved Alex's blackmail/ threatening/ torture of Nico, it was so well done. I was pretty ...

Heyo! Here we go. I was absolutely intrigued by the seemingly random items that Alex needed- “I just need some of her blood.” Joe looked confused again. “And a plastic ...

Hey Ganga! Back again. Into the feedback. aaaaaaAAAAAAHHHH NO NOT SEB NOT MY BABY *cries forever and ever* Okay you totally caught me by surprise and you ripped out my ...

Heyo! Again! I'll be done for the day after this one but I hope to keep plowing forward when I can. I don't have as much to say about this ...

Hellooooo! Review time! This is a fascinating chapter, with the new plot points. To start: is Daisy starting to lose it as well, by talking into her bracelet? Is she ...

Gosh, I love this story. The characters are just so well-rounded and natural and yum. I think her existential crisis is perfectly natural at this point in the story! Being ...

Heyyyy there. Wow, this is probably my favorite recent chapter! It felt really strong, and there were a LOT of plot points that I felt you addressed very well. The ...

Heyyyy again. Wow. I’m not a fan of Alex in this chapter, but his emotional outbursts and flashbacks do help me to sympathize somewhat, and definitely pity him. The interaction ...

Alright! Another long chapter. Do you plan to split these up in your next draft, or are you going to leave them as such long chapters? In my opinion, I ...

Hey Ganga! I know it’s been forever and that you already have pretty extensive, reliable reviews for your remaining chapters, but I’ve been wanting to finish this, since I’ve been ...