Sometimesinbetween

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! He watched in horror as some tried to run ...

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! Quote: He watched in horror as some tried to ...

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! Quote: He watched in horror as some tried to ...

Hey Gahks! Great piece of work here, I really liked it! This isn't a very useful critique, I just wanted to say that I found the elusive adjective, and on ...

I really like this! The second line didn't flow very well, maybe you could reword it a little? The rest was great! Also it had no puncuation. Other than that ...

I really liked this. It was very well written. I think it could use a little more puncuation though. Excellent job! -Sometimes-

This really held my attention. I love WWII stories. Awesome description! I couldn't find anything wrong with the grammer or punctuation. Just wanted to say great job! ~Sometimes~