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SofieR

  • Short Story » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Chase

    Thanks so much for reviewing!

    Aug 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Lyrical Re: The Chase

    Thanks so much for reviewing!

    Aug 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Gardener

    Thanks for reviewing, and for sharing that poem. Its a great one! :)

    May 12, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Health, General Re: Generation Z's Biggest Problem...

    ey there, jemming17! Sofie here with a review. Firstly, I want to commend you on picking a topic as important and timely as this one. I think the number one ...

    May 10, 2018
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Birthday Cards

    Thanks for the review, and for pointing out the inconsistencies with tenses. Getting on that ASAP. - Sofie

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Birthday Cards

    This made me smile XD Lookin forward to ur review!

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Birthday Cards

    Thanks so much for such a supportive review!

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Hereditary

    , thehotinpsychotic here to review!! First thing is nitpicky, but around this one area of a story there seems to be a lot of sentences about the same length that ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Term of respect.

    When I was in high school, my father would sometimes pick me up from band practice. It was a predominately white school, and I got my mom’s European features so ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Malala

    Yes, try that! Good call :)

    May 6, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    Thanks for reading! This review will be a big help when editing :) - Sofie

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    Hey! Yea, I sort of wrote this through a character who's about 17. Not sure why, really. I'm just used to writing about teenagers lol. Thanks for reading my stuff, ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    Thanks for reading!

    Oct 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    This will be a big help when editing. Thanks so much for the review!

    Oct 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: His Name Was Martin.

    This will be a big help when editing. Thanks so much for the review!

    Oct 26, 2016


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