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Thank you. I wasn't really sure how to make the stanza for this poem, so I kind of left it be. I know better next time. XD

I don't understand what you mean when you say order. I'm sorry, but can you explain?

This is an outstanding piece. It was very well written and the story line was very clear. My favorite line was when Abi said "I'm holding a knife to my ...

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This was really cool and kinda caught me off gaurd. It was written beautifully, and ended just right. Not much to say other then good job and keep writting! =)

This sound really good and leaves me curious about what’s going to happen in this story. You'll have to tell me when you have the first chapter out, it's defiantly ...

Oh and by the way it looked so much longer on my newbook page....just saying.

Wow, that's the only thing I could think of after reading this piece. It's beautiful and I just wanted to read more and more after I finished.