Snowery

Hullo! I'm here again, searching for brownies. Main Points a black trench cloak Okay, so I'm still confused about the era and place that we're in. By now we should ...

Megsug! Hullo, I'm back again :D Main Points Lornya Who is this guy? I know Obi is Lekan's uncle, but I have no idea who Lornya is. He's mentioned in ...

Hi, Megs! Brownie monster back to review for you! About your world. I'm slightly confused, and very curious about this world of yours. You mention kings, queens and smugglers so ...

Hey Megs! Silver back to review for you! :) Well, again it seems that I have no nit picks for you so characters and content it is again!Firstly I'm going ...

Hey Megsug! Silver here to review for you today! :) Well, this chapter has a lot of reviews so mine will probably be very short. I've got no nit picks ...

Aria! I'm back! Muahahaha... I was actually really excited to see this chapter posted up. Mainly because I have no idea where you're going with your story and thus am ...

Sherri! It's your buddy Silver back to review! :) You know how this goes: Main Points Maybe he had finally found a replacement for Gladys This line along with this: ...

Hey Mess! I'm back again to review another chapter! :) Main Points It drove what little air was in Fern’s wings Fern has wings? Awesome! Fern nearly lost her hold ...

Messy! I'm back! :) Main Points She had been taught about the basic controls by Jasper, the trainer, before ever riding a dragon. This sentence doesn't really flow well. Firstly ...

Hey Mess! Silver back again to give you another review! :) I see Laure and Stella have already done some awesome reviews, so this'll be a short one. Main Points ...

Hey Mess! Silver here to review for you today! :) Let's get straight to it: Main Points This dragon had the ability to breathe fire. I felt that this sentence ...

Hello MajesticAura! Silver here to review your story today! :) Well, first off I'll say that this was brilliantly done especially taking into account that this was your first story ...

Deanie! Silver here once more to review your chapter. Main Points I had spoken to Naomi; Boyle and Aoi were busy speaking amongst themselves. As soon as I saw this ...

Hullo Sherri, yes it's me again. No, I'm not going anywhere. Main Points Tall trees reached up to the skies with clambering branches that bled in every direction. Ooooh, lovely ...

Hey Alvarin! I'm back! Muahahaha!! So this was more of a filler chapter, which is cool because all novels need filler chapters right? The thing is just that I don't ...