Snowery

drilling sound ripped through Hey Pompo!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) Let's get straight to it shall we? Main Points Okay, so since it's a drilling sound, ...

Hey Aria!! Silver here to review your third chapter. :) :) Let's get straight into it shall we? Main Points but he didn’t let go of him Something about this ...

Hey MydnytRayn!!! Silver here to review your chapter here today!! :) First of all, what an interesting story! Even though the chapter length was short, it was full and I ...

Hey Aria! Silver here for a review!! :) Everyone else have basically stolen all the nitpicks and to tell you the truth I was so engrossed in the story that ...

Hey Aria! You don't mind me calling you that right? :) On to the: Main Points a lone horseman appeared in the horizon, I think this should be "a lone ...

Hey Noelle!! Silver here to review for you!! Main Points and let him stay for that amount of time. This sounded a little funny. Maybe try something like: and let ...

Hey Noelle! Can I say that I thought this was awesome? Well I'mma go ahead and say it anyway: I thought this was Awesome! I can feel so much back ...

Hey there Pompadour!! Silver here to review as requested!! :) I really, REALLY liked this but first, onto the: Main Points The wind passed by like a symphony of icicles, ...

Hey Mysteryme!! Silveer here to review for you! Can I start off by saying that I really loved this! It doesn't matter that it wasn't meant to be "top-notch literature" ...

Hey Cesare!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! You finished your novella!! Woohoo! Main Points because I heard the loud, brick door come to an abrupt stop Wait, there was a moving loud brick door? ...

Hey Cesare! Here we are at the penultimate peril!! :) Main Points There isn't much here so it won't be a long review. You've mentioned opalescent about three times within ...

Hey Cesare! You know the drill. :) Main Points nonexistent force None existence, I'm sure you know, means it doesn't exist so it's kind of contradictory. Viktor's body was dark. ...

Hey Cesare! It's me again, but don't worry there's only about three more chapters so you won't have to put up with me for long. :) Main Points Okay so ...

Hey Cesare! I'm back! Whether you like it or not :P Let's get straight into it. :) Main Points and my black hair was ruffled from the transportation. Transportation? Is ...

Hey Cesare! Silver here again! :) Great to see that you're powering through with your story!! :) Main Points I clutched my egg, and the environment began to change. Red ...