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Goodbye Mitchell!! You were awesome!!! Haha! I really hope that he comes back with another monstrous master piece! He better be back or I might just have track him down ...

It's the last one!! Noo!! I'm going to miss Mitchell :( It was an interesting and informative journey and now it's coming to an end. I love that he finished ...

Hey Mitch! I mean, BiSF!! I'm back again!! Main Points Urgh, so true! (stop promoting yourself, cocky little shits)* I loved the idea of you using footnotes! Awesome and totally ...

Back again!! Yeah! :) Main Points you may suck at committing to a long project. I felt like this sentence was incomplete, as if he was going to say more ...

Hey! Or in Mitchell's words: Yo !@#$% :D This was a really, really useful and helpful chapter. Mitchy has outdone himself. The advice is awesome and the most comprehensive that ...

Hey again!! :) Main Points Let’s look at some famous examples of opening lines… Hang on wait! What the fur? I just realised how formal, together and totally professional that ...

Hey you! Yes you! I'm back to review! Yo, yo, yo! I hope that these non-derogatory insults are not permanent? Why is it important to have three drafts of your ...

I'm back! Yeah :) The age old debate: character vs plot. Wait. What? Where's the usual insult and inform? :( a polar bear, Is he, like, really a polar bear? ...

Hey, hey! I'm back again! :) I was once writing a novel about a sea urchin that discovered the joys of cocaine. I would so love to read about that. ...

Hi BiSF!! Silver is back again!! :) that was the meth talking, Gosh mate, is that where all your ideas come from? (the one where she dies at the end) ...

Hey BiSF!! Silver is back for more!!! :) So welcome back retards. Thanks man. :) Lucky bitch. Isn't she just? Urgh, another amazing chapter from the amazing Mitchell. I seriously ...

Hey BiSF!! Silver here to review this!! Hello fuckfaced readers. You've got my attention :) Okay, so the others have basically covered all the nitpicks and also your grammar and ...

Hey!! I'ts me. Again :) Main Points then ran off, deeper into the forest. I just feel that the comma disrupts the flow a little. “Let’s first see if it ...

Hey there! Silver here to review for you!! :) Let's get straight into it! Main Points His eyes were blood-shot, I pictured that and it made me laugh! :) Geoff ...

Hey Speaker!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) Main Points You act different you try EVERYTHING but it doesn't work. I would suggest putting a comma after "different". ...