Snowery

Hey Fighta! :) Silver here again :) Main Points Dead ants. Great opening line! A real eye-catcher! :) Okay, so great way to end the piece, with the character's anxiety ...

Hey you! It's me again! :) Main Points but she began playing it on her phone and sang and danced along, Here began already indicates that you are using the ...

Hey Catcha!! :) Silver here to review for you! :) Let's get to it shall we? Main Point's putting me at peace for it, temporarily set me apart from the ...

Hey, hey! It's me again! :) Main Points The slants and angles... Here I am addressing this entire paragraph. I found it to be slightly ambiguous and may benefit from ...

Hey fighta!! Silver here to review for you this fine day! :) Straight to it :) ----> Main Points I was unwanted there. No longer could I stand the pain. ...

Hey! Silver here to review for you! There's been a lot of reviews already so I won't really have much to say. First of all I really like your descriptions. ...

Hey Lu! Silver to review you chapter! Or part of a chapter! :) So , once again no nit picks from me! Congrats! :) So the killing scene! Sandrine seemed ...

Heya Lulu!! Silver is back again! :) No nitpicks!! :) From me anyway, I've never been that good at finding them . So it's straight to content then ---> Smirking, ...

Hey fight!! Silver here to review your first chapter! :) :) Well, there are quite a lot of reviews below me so I won't really say much seeing as they've ...

Hey! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) Well! What an awesome start! There is just so much character development already in this prologue. As a reader I have ...

Hey Elinor!! Silver here to review for you!! First of all I just wanted to say that I don't know much about script writing and how much detail you include ...

Hey Noelle! Silver here to review another of your chapters! This is a pretty short piece so there's not too much to say, and as usual Birky's stolen , most ...

Hey Luce! Silver is back to review for you! :) Main Points He knew something I didn't. He knew what the word "vampire" meant. I just- I just really like ...

Hey Luce!! Silver here to review for you!! Main Points "How do you feel about murder?" Brilliant. Great first line hook! :) yet that question is still so fresh in ...

OHMAGOSH!!! A second book!!!! *Hyperventilates* Well as usual you do not fail to impress!! Awesome job. :) A couple of things that I noticed: and it was pitch black out. ...