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Aw, this is adorable! :D One thing! I would change the poem slightly to this: Poor little eraser dog, he's missing one of his ears, a careless mistake in a ...

Hi seana! :D I know you didn't want us to comment on this, but... well... the spelling can be corrected easily. So do it! ;) First of all, this is ...

Hi Becca! :D Aha! A looking-into-mirror-and-confronting-yourself poem! :D I would probably start with stanza two, actually... the first stanza isn't really important overall to the poem, so I think it

Haha, I love that album, "Here Comes Science!" And then, you used that in a personalized poem invitation? Awesome! Were I your age, I would probably go out with you ...

Hey KAH! Demeter's right! It did sound more like a song than an actual poem. As a poem, it seemed much too repetitive and and rhyme-y (like that's even a ...

Oooh, I liked this poem! It kind of reminded me of Shel Silverstein's poems... and I adore Shel Silverstein. :) It also kind of reminded me of Dr. Seuss's "The ...

Hi Lena! Nate got the spelling and grammar part, so I won't bug you about that! :D Anyway, one of the things I would love to see is you going ...

Awww, so cute! Anyway, one of the things that I wondered about was, this guy is obviously dead, right? And he was meaningful to the girl who is still alive. ...

Hey Lawson! :D So, this format kind of reminds me of the Twilight zone! You have the prologue, where that one guy is talking about the Twilight Zone, then it ...

Hey Eli! I have to say, I have to agree with Abigail here! The poem just fell flat. It seemed like you were writing more of an opinion piece than ...

Hi introvert! :D Hmm... you have a very interesting poem! It kind of reminds me of the old-school romances that I so adore. :D One idea... maybe you can rewrite ...

Aha, the whole pawn situation! I didn't really like it, lol. It was kind of obvious, too obvious for my tastes, and it held a bunch of cliched images. The ...

Denia! I love your first stanza! It's clipped and short and strange and beautiful all at once. Love the talk of Jupiter... it reminds me of Roman mythology! And the ...

Hello Warrior Princess! :D Okay! So first of all, I am a major science geek. XD Anyway, when I was reading your poem, I was first looking for the end ...

Hey Kylan! Your poem is amazing, but I think you knew this already! Anyway, something in the picture caught my eye and you didn't actually mention it in the poem... ...