Snoink

Ew. "To surround with troops, beseige. Delete it." Grif said, without looking away from the display. SHOULD BE "To surround with troops, beseige. Delete it," Grif said, without looking away ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! :D I noticed that this had no comments on it. Sad? I thought so! So I'm critiquing it. If you have any questions ...

Ooooh, this is pretty! :D I got that the miracle was a baby and the miracle dying was the baby, dead. I'm fairly certain I'm right. But I don't think ...

So! You asked for a video critique. AND I DID IT! Here it is: So basically, I read through your poem and commented on it afterwards. You know the drill. ...

Ooo! I actually really like this poem. Maybe it's just because I'm a music geek, but yeah. I really liked how the critics are abandoned for the birds. Awesome. The ...

Awwww... smileforever! Such a sweet name. :) First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm Snoink, a moderator of YWS, and if you need any help whatsoever getting around the site, ...

This is so totally going to be starred... *stars* There! :D 10:12:18 PM Snoink: so! 10:12:23 PM Snoink: how are you brilliant? XD 10:13:52 PM Areida: uh, sort of. 10:13:55 ...

And don't forget to write in proper English and capitalize everything that needs to be capitalized. ^^ Anyway, these lyrics were quite strange. In the middle of it, you started ...

Eek! This is so cute. *stars* There are only three lines that don't really make sense with the rest of the poem: She turns toward home To keep the ancient ...

Okay! It's waaaaaay too late here, so this critique will probably make no sense, but when I read your poem, it reminded me of this other poem that I absolutely ...

Just a quick note... you can totally use the f-word in your poems and stories, so don't worry about that, and don't censor yourself, if that's the word that really ...

Eek! Nice poem. But before I start complimenting it and everything, let me introduce myself, seeing as you're new and such! :D I'm Snoink, and basically I'm on YWS waaaaaay ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! :D I'm a moderator, which means that if you need any help at all on YWS, you can always contact me and I'll do ...

Hm. Interesting poem! What I like the most is that you touch on the whole dehumanizing of a person. That is, you go from relatively simple remarks and bring it ...

Eek, this was not as good as I would normally expect from you. The part I liked was this: [quote]When I set your soul free, you flew away from me ...