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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Blade

    i liked it because it is somthing i can relate to even if it was a little orced i still liked it it is always something deeper then wanting atention ...

    Oct 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I didn't mean to hit submit

    i thought it was ok but i have to agree with firestarter i didn't really like the last stanza

    Oct 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Fallen Angel

    i liked this poem i think that you need to work on it a little but so far it is good

    Oct 23, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lovin you

    i think it was well writin

    Oct 23, 2005


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