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you could have done was select songs for every chapter so that the reader would have something to listen to for every song. I believe if I would've done that, ...

I haven't read your novel , but when I do I'll add another review to this! Skin's novel, my dear. Right here . xD

She mixes English and Spanish purposely, lol. It's sort of to authenticise her character.

My biggest appologies x) The genre has been tweaked now that I've settled on where I'm going with this and where I'd like readers to see where I'm headed with ...

Go right on ahead and request whatever reviews you like. ;)

Will be back to lend my opinion of this as soon as I find the quiet to read! ^-^ It looks good.

Vel. :) Thanks a lot for the review. I can see your points very clearly. I appreciate the kind words and understand your view. The point of the poem was ...

My better review ^-^ : There was no more petroleum in New York. So were the people. (The second sentence doesn't sound right here. Maybe take it out, or tweak ...

My friend, you have talent ;) This was thoroughly entertaining. You should be proud of your awesome writing abilities. I LOVED this. Great work.

I can tell where you made some tweaks. This was good! I noticed little minor grammar errors, but who doesn't make those? I think you added more thought into this ...

Back to edit. Here we go :) CHAPTER EIGHTEEN THE SECRET PART I Ismael was sitting down(,) drinking his coffee when Marky came to his suite. He sat on the ...

Thanks all, for the positive reviews and the help in critiqueing. I made some minor editing, but this poem I feel is still very unfinished. I thank Snoink for the ...

Hello CS :) Here to edit some more. I'll just be putting in red the alterations I have made mainly. Easy peasy. Here we go. CHAPTER SIX CHAPERONE Sandy's suite ...